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Emerald City Ghosts's avatar

The detail in this is beautiful.

Cayse M. Shultz's avatar

Thank you so much!

Colleen Bent's avatar

How awful...I love the way you told your story, it was gripping. It took a while for me to figure out what was happening and I really like the way it unfolded. A great job. You are my 382nd bedtime story.

setaria's avatar

the line “I just didn’t know at the time how horrible it was for me to write them” adds a heartbreaking layer of regret, showing the complexity of grief and the ways it can be misunderstood, especially when we’re young. this is beautiful........

The Honeyed Library's avatar

She'll be remembered through these words always